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November 18, 2010

Biography of Pip Davenport!

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On the 4th of January 1850 a child, Pip Davenport, was born in Slewsbury. As the boy grew up, he helped his uncle henry at his funfair. Pip spent time with his uncle all day and studied at the night.

Pip grew older to the age of eleven. He got so obsessed with fantastic inventions and outstanding carnival rides, so he took place in a competition and won several prizes for winning. He won so many prizes such as: Engineering Awards 1861, Slewsbury Inventer, Fire of fury, and Avast inventions.

As pip reached adulthood, he had a kid called george. George wasn’t interested  in inventions and magical rollercoasters, he was only interested in modern toys. Pip’s career was over , however, he started to write books about Fairgrounds with his wife Hettie. A few months later, Pip Davenport had died in the cause of starvation in slewsbury at the time of 1920…..

I thought that Goerge would have been more like his father, but times had changed and only two survived.

3 Comments

  1.   Lilia — November 23, 2011 @ 7:01 pm    Reply

    i find it a bit short but very ditailed.Even self comment!I am a teacher!Give it 10/10!

  2.   Abinaya — April 9, 2011 @ 3:00 pm    Reply

    it is so cool i can try to do like that:)

  3.   Jake — November 18, 2010 @ 9:58 am    Reply

    This is very good because you have got some good words..

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